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-From the distance,
looks back the heart of you-
remembering, retouching the cell-
creating each day passed.
So long, and far away,
we felt the roses of summer growing.
All rekindles, after the storm-
a generation of spirit.

After the vanishing, I returned here,
to search- to find the one true color of life,
that remained behind.
I seemed to have lost myself,
in the regathering of dust-
lost, in the ways you showed me,
to feel- to trust, and never again,
shall I know, such airs of innocence
I found in your heart.

I know now, why leaves fall gold in Autumn,
and why the rains come without warning.
I keep this- I retain the twilight within me,
that holds each moment passed, like a diary,
filled all the wonderful things...
you taught me to see.


------
David T. Culver


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The following comments are for "After the Vanishing (for Amber Hangerman)"
by moonrising36109

After the vanishing
All I can say is that this is beautiful..My Best Lorraine

( Posted by: Lorraine [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

The Act of Vanishing
I see...
to believe...
even after I've vanished

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 17, 2015 )





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