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I like the way you switched it up on me when you messed up it was because of me
to you i had to be right.
but yelling at me out of the blue was just another reason to fight
and all those tears i've spend on you was just has worthless has all the love
you claimed to feel for me
and all those reason to die and all those times i woke up an cried
it all came from you this pain that i'm still going through.
was based on all your flaws as a man
and all your insecurites has a person
it was so easy for you to blast out on me an critzcise my family
and then you would of stapped out of the zone your in. an apologize
again and again always begging me
always convincing me that it was just because i made you mad
the best thing that ever happen to me was you
because i've learned what to take an what not to take
because of you and for that i thank you.
years ago you couldent tell me it was all just a fake
but now i'd proble agree with you.
but the way i see it
it was something i had to go through
if it doesn't kill you it makes you stronger
an for that reason i can live and love so much different
then the way i loved with you.
nothing but sincere
thanks from me to you.

Stacy Robles

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