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Why did u tell me you loved me
when I know in the end all you wanted was to be the first one of your boys to Claim me
and now that you've have me how can you just lettme go
like i was nothing to you and i suffered more then you ever knew.
What about are love?
was the fight we fought in the name of love
a lame game we played to have something to do?
and what about all those i love you's?
words that faded away in time
What about are love?
i've sacriface it all for you i would have left each one of my family mebmers to
it was that sick kinda love that too blind to even see the person you've came to be.
once you raised your hand at me i knew what we been through wasn't enough to keep me tied down to to you.
and what about your friends that all the sudden turned on me with jealous
did you have fun playing their same evil games and hating me to.
when all i did was try to love you
what about are Love?
do we just fade away like memorys that don't last or stay>
and what about those i love you's so they just die out once you walked out on me and the please don't leave you didn't hear cuz u were to worried about my mistakes counting and calulateing and then you'd get madd if i bring out your list of misfits
What about are love?
what about are love was it all just a fake
and all those please don't leave didn;t mean a thing to you
in a way i'm glad we're through because love wasn't you an me and it would never be.
it took me to many heartbreaks to come to this conclusion
if i can change one thing go back to the start i would do almost everything differently
but i won't change the fact that we ever part
because all you inspired me to do was fight with you.
What about are love? the truth is
their was never love between me and you it's just
another lesson learn let it burn.


------
Stacy Robles


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The following comments are for "What about are love?"
by Epstet1125

what about "are" love???
i don't know where you're from. i checked your bio and it didn't really say. after reading this i was a bit confused, did u mean "are love" or "our love". then there are alot of mistakes in the middle. reread and edit.

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: June 30, 2004 )





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