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I had a dream like martin Luther King,
But it's a little different you see,
I plan to be a nurse with a college degree.
Sometimes I think i can't make it.
It takes dedication,
You have to be strong,
But in the end,
It won't go wrong.
Because there is "no gains without pain"

I had a best friend,
But she did me wrong.
For days I thought i'd never recover,
I told her my serect and when i blinked my eye,
Everybody knew and that's the reason why,
We broke up the next day,
All is good, and all is okay.
But a word of advice I sent out to you,
"An open foe may prove a curse; but a pretend friend is worse."

I've been going out with this guy,
For a year or so,
But you see.
He was playing me thou.
I found out thou his friend,
nd now i look into his eyes,
and all i see is lies,
He admitted it,
then that was it,
But i have to say,
I was waiting for him to slip.
"A small link will sink a great ship."

Stacy Robles

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