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Grandma i love you when the road gets fogged,
I love you granny when i'm sititng here all alone
thinking about the times i did you wrong
your fighting for your life and i can't help out if i could i'll offer god my life for your and you'll be around to stay even when your hair turns gray
just promise me you won't leave hold on for me please i need you hear to stay!
Not another memory to comfort me or i'll explode i need you here now until i get old.
i would have wanted you to see me graduate i would have wanted you to give a speech
to tell all the grannies in the world your the best one and i promise i'll agree just don't leave me here like this with a broken heart just come back give me a chance to prove my love to you.
hold on stay to see another day just one last kiss i need from your lips to make everything okay.
tell me you'll be happy then I promise i'll let you go just know you'll never leave my heart i loved you from the start

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Stacy Robles


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The following comments are for "Grandma don't leave"
by Epstet1125

another memory to comfort
I really appreciated the raw, emotional run of this piece. Thank you for sharing.

( Posted by: SkyTigress [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )





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