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To step out of this same ordinary atmosphere where everybody is like a clone society tells them what's good and bad for them and they look up to them like a little sister looks up to her older sister mimcking every move she makes. they dont ever think on their own no one stands out this consistancy i've strayed away from some where in the midst of the summers eve i 've found myself at peace hearing the sweet sounds of birds of all different colors singing a sad melody like a choir or a symphony they join together the sound lifts me to my feet and my hips dance to the beat. they're singing from time to time while stopping in and saying hi suprised at the amazement in their eyes because they've never seen a human being face to face. these precious birds that have never spoken words of hate or lies and i cry because it's something i've seen so much of. if only i knew salvation was a few miles away these birds would have known a familiar face.
the sun beaming through the trees with undying force yet a light breeze touching my face like a hand or a warm embrace. as i'm siting here surrounded by thousands of trees looking down on me i'm overwhelmed with anxiety i know i don't stand a chance against them i'm a little piece of dirt compared to them. amazing creatures stopping by like they knew i was dropping by dears,insect's squirrels walking amongst each other in perfect harmony i try to get over this shock i now know what it means when they say a man can become young again here and for that reason i lay down my pride, envy and ignorance just to have another piece of this beautiful paradise i've come across i call it my heaven on earth where as of today i look at life in a different way i lift my hands to the sky as a sign of sacrifice an i am transformed.

Stacy Robles

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