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Life is sometimes unfair
Many times no matter how much you try some people don't care
Some will do whatever it takes to get "somewhere"
Some will lie, cheat, or steal
Especially if they think it's a great deal
Do to this will they learn how true love feels?
Some think money is more important then life
For this they will use all their energy to fight
Will they ever see the light?
Some just want to talk they think, "listen to me"
Consumed with themselves the view in the mirror is all they can see
Some claim, "I have no time"
But for "themselves" time they will find
Some are always late
For it's only their time that they appreciate
Some are just so cold
If they would only realize within reach is a pot of gold.
The gold I am referring is not worth a dollar or even a cent
But it is much stronger than even cement
It can't be bought or even spent
It's the love within the heart that truly makes a person content
That is a lesson life has taught me
For without real love no one can truly see

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The following comments are for "Life Lesson"
by FireSerpent

"Life Lesson"
You go girl, I gave you a 10.

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: June 26, 2004 )

Lots of words
are sometimes necessary. This is obviously written by with that need, within yourself. Nice. I gave you a 10 as well. Just need to check the grammar before your submissions. Double check, helps those 10s stay up there. I enjoyed reading this.

( Posted by: catlesfemme [Member] On: June 26, 2004 )

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