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Words fall
onto crisp
paper written
there to please,
to savor.
Carrying hopes
far and near
warming hearts,
easing fears.
Words in all
their worldly
grace wipe
teardrops from
a sad face.
They prance,
ryhme, and drift
with consonants
and vowels
they lift us up
and bring us down,
bring a laugh
or a frown...words.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Words"
by Char

Words
Hi Char,I really like your poem. Yes ,words leave us with so much.My goodness,where would we be without them.this is very, very nice.My Best ..Lorraine

( Posted by: Lorraine [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

Absolutely Great!!
What more can I say, but you just have a way! Keep up the great work Char! :-)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

Words...
And You certainly have a way with them...

Great Read, Thank You...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

words...
Very sweet- if we didn't have an appreciation for words, we'd all be on ebay. Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed it! -emaks

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

words
are powerful

Your poem says so much for the power that words have in our lives! A very nice read!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

Thank you
Some say words are sharper than swords, but ney-
they are the the very soil in which we plant our soul.

( Posted by: paxelius [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

words
Words fall onto... is a crisp line. You definitely can write a short and yet very beautiful poem, Char. I also like this one very much.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

Thank You
Thank you everyone for your kind words. I am happy you like this poem. :) It makes my day tha you do.

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 27, 2004 )

Comment to:Char
Lions, and tigers and bears...oh my!

Other great ice-breaking poem titled "Words"

Like a great painter, you use broad strokes across the canvas with you poem titled "Words"

"Only a Word can Say" is a title of one my poems.

Words are powerful...just like an afrodesiac.

In this particular poem, your words resonate with a frequency range extending beyond the moon and the star.

This poem sings like a choir in church

This poem shines like a superstar!

It only takes one word to say hello

Greg

( Posted by: trilliumithiumothogonaltitaniumnanogenome [Member] On: July 2, 2004 )





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