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Tyfer pulled out of a dive, hoping that the pursuer lost him. He was wrong. The Kit rolled to the side and began shooting. Sensing danger, Tyfer looped and came up behind the Kit. whunk whunk whunk. A ball of lasers tore right through the fighter's cockpit, annialating the pilot.

"Good shot Tyfer!"

"Thanks, Mada."

Tyfer had meet Mada at his flight school. She was tall, had blond hair and blue eyes. He was her wingman in most battles. Just then, three Kits pulled up behind her and blew out her star-gage booster. Tyfer flew up behind them. With a wave of shots, he was able to decimate two of them.

"Tyfer, I'm hit. I'm ack-."


Tyfer watched as Mada's ship hurled into the atmoshpere of the planet, Keller 7. He pulled his ship away form the battle, full of anger and flew after her.

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