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Don't print this my dear.
Archive it in that devious mind.
I am here for a reason,
a purpose I serve.
May not be obvious now,
but it will be revealed.
So if you think you can humble or
degrade me,
think again.
And while you are at,
heres the finger,
archive that too!

------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Archive that!"
by nae411

Windchime/the finger
Hi Windcime, I have no idea why I wrote this or how. Maybe was thinking of a crazy customer! This is so not me, unless It is the subconscious me??? I was going to delete it now and then realized it got published and read, yikes!!! I do have teenagers, one adopted the others not. I was not five, but thank you!!! You made my day. I am 36.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 20, 2004 )

Hey Nae
I liked this very much, Nae, thank you for it. And thank you for all your wonderful comments about my work. I feel like you're my #1 fan now. Just so you know, I wasn't hiding anywhere, I just recently discovered LitOrg and I'm so happy I did.

I am so pleased when my words can influence someone so much that they feel compelled to comment. You have made me feel so good about my writing and that feeling makes me want to work harder and write more. I'll be checking our your work and commenting in the near future. Thanks again.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: June 20, 2004 )

Nice Nae
Give em the finger Nae...LOL. This is a fun read. Too cute.

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 20, 2004 )

Archive that!
I am your fan, I read everything you write and I am glad you decided against deleting this. This is very good!

Windchime is right, you look very young and beautiful(beautiful is mine comment). Makes me conclude that good poets are good looking.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: June 21, 2004 )

reply/archive that
Odysseus, you deserve the comments, your work is wonderful. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

Char, I had to snicker at your comment. Do you know I have never ever given anyone the finger, felt like it though. Maybe this is from years of suppression. LOL

Peter, what can I say to you??? You are not only a great poet but could also strike it rich as #1 head hauncho in advertisement. You flatter me to no end. You are wonderful, simply wonderful!!!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 21, 2004 )

LoL
I like this poem...and I think its rather funny!

( Posted by: DBurke [Member] On: June 21, 2004 )

for the records

Very funny, very hearttrue -

john

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: June 22, 2004 )

Talented Diva..
Really liked this lyric "Nae" You
are the best.

"Here's the finger
Archive that too!"

"Fantabulicious"....Mouse..

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: June 23, 2004 )

giggles
well that last few lines sure tickled My funny bone! Some days are just like that!

I loved it!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

Nae, 36????
This is such a great read, I am going to read this several more times before a week is up. I am glad you didn't delete it. Aren't you now too? And by the way Nae, you are very young looking, pretty. I love the avatars, adding a face to our every growing family here. Aside now, this was very very good Nae.

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 26, 2004 )

Dareva
Thank you Dareva, I am definately 36 and proud of it. So glad to be out of my 20's those years were not so good. About deleting it, I am really surprised by the good response. I didn't think anybody would like this. Goes to show, what to do I know?

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 26, 2004 )





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