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NOTE: Kinda anti... well, bacically anti-God (we're having some difficulties with each other right now), so if that bothers you, don't read. I don't mean offense to anyone at all: this is my little rant-poem, please, please, please don't take offense. If I do make you mad, I'm sorry, but I did warn you. So, without further disclaimer:


Whoís your savior?
Is it a god, someone you believe in
some entity you say is
Who do you call Savior?
Jesus Christ
No one at all?
The problem with gods is
they created humans only after
we created them
The Creator becomes created
Creation, the powerful Creator
Humans donít want to
handle the power
so we place it in our creations
and they destroy us
as we pray
to our self-destructive saviors

Heaven doesn't want me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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The following comments are for "Saviors"
by SWHCgirl

I love it!!!!!!!!!
You have captured my pet gripe against believers of all kinds ^_^

The amount of people who refuse even to consider this possibility continually astounds me!

Existance stems from belief, in all things :)

Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: March 6, 2002 )

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