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rumbling hungry this dream awakens me
commanding piously "throw down your hand.
draw cards not to your chest-they serve you
no purpose but to imprison so dutifully"

ive been overcome by this nightmare before
despite my sincerity failed you still
so i stand aside and alone sowing no pain-
to deny you of it cannot harm your will.

longing to create a light that may blind me
burning all that may come but i still feel
the projection of my shadow fading
as i succumb to it

holding me by a thread
escape to the enfilade
leading me by the hand
relinquishing virtuous command
drawing from within
spawning the never been
sharing emotions stripped
smothering you with disappointments grip.



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