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can you hear me now?
I call from the distance
traped in the dark of myself
and lit but for an instant

I'm calling to you
from the safety of inside
amongst my bones and my character
and all the feelings I let lie

but when I call, I now discover
that saftey is my cell
the bars, my emotions
the jailer, the lies I tell

but I can hear you now
your words sing like a stay of execution
a shining light of hope to guide me
from the halls of my exclusion

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The following comments are for "The Safety of Inside"
by dhazelrig

i like it.
that should be a song. very very nice. it can connect with alot of people, probably. it connected with me, that's all i know.


( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: March 6, 2002 )

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