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i wonce was so innocent,so young and nieve
i gave you my heart and you made me belive
belive that i was beautiful and that i'd go far
in your eyes i was perfect, your bright and shining star
i shared with you my hopes and dreams
we could talk about anything, or thats how it seemed
you where my sholder to cry on when i needed you there
you kept me from remembering pain i cound not bare
when you looked at me i was lost in your eyes
i could reach past heaven, i could touch the skys
in your arms nothing could reach me,the wolrd faded away
just a moment with you could cheer up my day
and now thats its over i can not be sad
not while i remember the good times we've had
so now you move on, i'll try to find someone new
but no matter what happpens, my first love was you

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~*~little*one~*~


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The following comments are for "looking back"
by littleone

YAY
IT'S GREAT!LOL
~M.J.~

( Posted by: DeMoNiCcHiLd [Member] On: October 30, 2005 )





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