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Im hurting and Im hating
You hit an open wound
You and I were once best friends, I put all my trust in you
I told you all my problems because I thought youd understand
I put my heart and soul into you but you didnt give a damn
I defended you, I loved you
I gave you all I had
And I began to believe that you loved me
But I guess I was just a fad
Whyd you have to hurt me?
Why not accept me for who I am?
Instead you let me walk away, you just lost your biggest fan
I had faith in you
I supported you in everything you did
And what did I get in return?
You took me for granted
You hurt me and you made me cry
Now its time to say goodbye
Sometimes I think if only you knew
How good I had been to you

Thanks for taking the time to read my poems. Much love kiddos and I hope my poems meant something to you! Never give up on your dreams :)

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