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I remember Big Bear Mountain
Those warm and cozy Friday nights
Playing scrabble and going bowling
Before all the yelling and endless fights
Coming home to open arms
Stories of growing up and life on the farms
Staying up and baking pies
A life without fear, a home free of lies
But then something changed, it all went away
I knew it would happen to us someday
But why now when everything felt so good?
Nothing was going the way that it should
Life went on, but I was stuck in the past
Couldn't move onto the future, it was coming to fast
I wasn't ready to move on, at least not yet
All those good memories, I didn't want to forget
But as time passed I started to realize
That as life went on, so must I
So I prepared myself to take on whatever fate had planned next
And life went on


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Thanks for taking the time to read my poems. Much love kiddos and I hope my poems meant something to you! Never give up on your dreams :)


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The following comments are for "Life Goes On"
by SuGapLuM1107

Life goes On
You have said it well. Yes,life goes on,yet the future will hold many wonderful things. We must let it enfold us.Not forget the past,but look forward to what beauty lies ahead.Very well written. My Best ..Lorraine

( Posted by: Lorraine [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )





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