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To Copenhagen Iíll swim
For I have to be next to my sister.
In the crowded port
As the target Iíll smile to their flashguns Ė
Light!
And Iíll freeze as a shadow of sight,
Wet and cold, reflecting the clouds
For the time,
for the centuries to comeÖ

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Sua sponte,
O.


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The following comments are for "Little Mermaid"
by City

city's "swim" in time...
Great images and a wondrous story...A pleasurable read.


BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 22, 2005 )





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