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Three years have passed and Tyfer still fights today in his ancient Knocker 5. He now has a 10.9 billion yu'langs on his head after the stunts he pulled. Like when he travled to Point Alpha.

It was a stormy day, the giant squid-like creatures could be seen overhead. Tyfer had ate, slept, and done everything else in his ship. Tyfer's home planet, Yisten, was hit by an asteriod and was annialated in a thick cloud of fire and smoke. Millions of its people died, those left are considered heros. Tyfer was no hero, he was a bum, a spy helping a forming resistance force that he made.

On the way to Foc'tora, a starship came out of nowhere and fired a wave of lasers.

"Captain, the ships main hual has been blown open", exclaimed one of the pilots.

"Send a force to kill anything that boards."

"Yes, sir!"

Within minutes an uproar of laser fire shook the ship. The gunship started firing, but it was decimated by Knocker Squadron. Led by Tyfer.

"Ok, Knocker 10, head for the command deck of that ship, try to destroy it!"

"Yes, sir!"

"Knocker leader (Tyfer). You got one on your tail!"

"I cant shake him!"

Continued in Part 2

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The following comments are for "Star Gazers 4:Point Alpha Part 1"
by kickflip

Wow!
That is really good!You also wrote a lot.When do you have the time?

( Posted by: Panda [Member] On: March 4, 2002 )

re:wow!
thanx panda.

( Posted by: kickflip [Member] On: March 5, 2002 )





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