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Morning glory blooms
in the lane where huni lives
still - she goes to school.

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Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.


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by Huni

Morning Glory
Huni;
This Haiku is a breath of fresh air, thanks for a great read...


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )

JEANNIE
So glad you enjoyed it. I lived in a lane where morning glory grew, and as a dreamy, nature girl, school never had the same appeal that the back lane had. Thanks for reading it JEANNIE. regards huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

geeze!
I'm captured and enchanted, this haiku stuff is marvelous. I've mostly, in the past, been of the mindset that one should be as thorough as possible when developing the character or plot, and expand them to the fullest, i.e. as many strokes of the keyboard as it takes, including nouns/verbs/adjectives/adverbs/etc. You say more in 14 words than many say in a lifetime.. love your stuff and style!

( Posted by: wordman [Member] On: July 13, 2004 )

wordman
I am vain enough to love comments. Every now and then, some one makes a comment that fills me up and makes me glad I write. This is one of those. Thank-you. regards huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: July 13, 2004 )





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