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I'd write for you
a lonely song,
the loneliest of all...
I'd write for you
a lonely song,
so you won't hear me fall

And I won't love
and I'll still long
forever gone,
I don't belong...

I'll shy away,
away I'll crawl,
before your dawn,
so you won't hear
my call....


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