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When all else fails me,
your smile captures my heart.
Warmth in your eyes,
heats my soul, sending passion deep within.
Your touch delivers hope,
to an otherwise empty world.
Memories of years together
make for foundations of solid rock.
You have been my friend, my lover, my escape.
Collective thoughts,
moments that cease to exist,
still command homage and respect.
When all else fails me,
I still have you.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "When All Else Fails"
by nae411

When All Else Fails I Read Renae's Poems
This is so good! Can we just go on looking like flattering each other, Nae? But this is so good really and what else can I say? These lines are so good for a 'Happy Anniversary' greeting card. Hallmark can pay you a lot of money if they'll only know about this site. I'll say it again: YOU BECOME IMMORTAL BECAUSE OF YOUR POETRY.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: June 11, 2004 )

Peter & Windchime
Peter Paulino & Windchime,I am so flattered, I have tears in my eyes. Thank you so much, I am humbled especialy because the comments came from the two of you.

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

When ...
This is so deep. It reaches into the inner me, the depth of reality. Simply beautiful Renae.

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Astounding
This is astounding Renae. Very real and oh so sweet.

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Nice..
Yes, very nice Nae. I liked this write up.

When all else fails me,
I still have you.

Excellent.

It's all good....Mouse..

( Posted by: raejon [Member] On: June 14, 2004 )

Writing..
Renae and Peter are talented writers.
I love all the work you two have written.

Take care..........Mouse..

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: June 14, 2004 )

Very Nice
I relate to this so well... it is well written and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it... Sincerely Bev Raffaele... Http://www.Artspoetry.com

( Posted by: BevRaffaele [Member] On: June 17, 2004 )





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