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Star-studded laughey-eyes ring praises true to
the happy Man, a warrior whose
gaunt portrayal of Those Bad People
won hearts and minds entwined.

But behind those happy-lips hides an ethic hollow;
a bottom-feeding benthic critter whose demons'
wake of half-untruths will become the feed for histories yet unmade.

Beware the greed-grins' sway of the hidden Mongol horde;
the arms that rock you gently are also known to choke.

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