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Just a bit about this poem it is true it really happened to my brother in law well except for the last line we all know that darn goose is dead!

Darn Goose

I went along just hunting and feeling pretty loose,
I heard a shot and saw my friend yep, he hit a goose.
I didn't see to where it fell or where it came to rest,
Until I heard this loud thunk and something hit my chest.

I didn't know what happened but felt like something lacked,
And suddenly to my surprise everything went black.
I woke up in the hospital the doctor had a smile,
Then everyone in the room laughed for quite a while.

Confusion set into my head I didn't have a clue,
What they thought was funny or what it had to do,
With why I was in here and what had happened to me,
I couldn't get an answer they wouldn't let it be.
Then suddenly there was a pain that came from on my chest,
I finally figured out, where that darn goose came to rest..

Now everytime I hear, a loud and sudden sound,
I don't know why, but I find,my body on the ground.
I can't control what happens I suddenly just drop,
So if I found that darn goose I'll give him a big pop!!


Written by:
Catherine Sawyer


------
Catherine R. Sawyer


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The following comments are for "Darn Goose"
by mom11159

Goosed
Well what can I say, you know you've been well goosed when you end up in hospital!

Nice one Cathy, but I thought errotica was banned on this site.

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

goosed
Thanks so much just a pick on my brother in law poem thanks for reading
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Goosed
Cathy, This flowed well and had me giggling. Works for me!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Thank you
Thank you for your comment Nae
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )





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