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Just a bit about this poem :
My sister was 6 months pregnant and went into premature labor. After 2 medical sonograms the doctors came in and told her that her baby had a separation in the back of his head and that the brains were partially out and that her baby didn't not have a chance to survive he would not live much more than a few hours if that after being born.
We prayed like no one has prayed before. They did an emergency c-section and we experienced a miracle. There was no signs of a hole or opening in his head. The doctors were dumb founded and could not explain. He was perfectly normal except for being a premature baby and only weighing 2lbs. When we saw him he look exactly like my father his grandfather. So in this poem I tell you what I think happened.

A Miracle Has Come
Anthony

Little angel, little baby, little grandson,
We heard your call and we came a miracle has been done.
We put our hearts together to help yours beat so strong,
God came with us on this journey, so nothing could go wrong.
Our arms were all around you to keep all harm away,
We held you close and kissed your head so you could grow and play

Our darling little angel our walk with you is done,
Now in your parents arms you, go your life has now begun.
So when you look at mommy we will see her too,
And from that look and your touch our love will flow through you.
To let your mommy know, that we helped you on your way,
Our gift to her was you, for now you live today!!

Always with you our dear grandson,
We love you,
Grandpa and Grandma Sawyer

written by Aunt Cathy
Catherine Sawyer











------
Catherine R. Sawyer


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The following comments are for "A Miracle Has Come"
by mom11159

Miracle
Cathy, this was absolutely beautiful. You gave me goosebumps. I've said it before, you are a blessing!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Blessing
No one has ever told me that before and now you have said it twice thank you so very much for making me feel special.
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Miracle
Cathy,

I do not know how I missed this one and found it while browsing my favorite authors (this site is excellant)

The poem,

This beautiful piece of poetry serves as a thank you and should be posted in heaven!

Believe in miracles, the sceptics will give a rational explanation..... let them, some would clinically disect the soul if they could catch it!

Thank you for sharing this.

Now sorry, punctuation to make it read easier:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Little angel, Little baby, Little grandson,
We heard your call, and we came, a miracle has been done.
We put our hearts together to help yours beat so strong,
God came with us on this journey, so nothing could go wrong.
Our arms were all around you, to keep all harm away,
We held you close and kissed your head, so you could grow and play

Our darling little angel our walk with you is done,
Now in your parents arms you go, your life has now begun.
So when you look at mommy, we will see her too,
And from that look, and your touch, our love will flow through you.
To let your mommy know, that we helped you on your way,
Our gift to her was you, for now you live today!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Moved one comma and added a few, I think it helps.

This is a poem that your sister and daughter will cherish for a lifetime, and pass on to your daughters children, well done.

I just love happy endings!


Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: June 21, 2004 )





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