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gloomy days,
shady thoughts,
vengeance glows in the darkest hearts,
waiting for the faultless time to strike,
my mind filled with hatred, my hands with spite
as you approach, i shiver with delight,
eagerness ascende and so does the night,
enjoying the moment, not wanting it to end,
fulfilling the wish of murdering you my friend,
watching your helpless face that lies within my grip,
as i tie the rope tightly around your neck, so you won't slip,
my intentions were good, they've always been,
as your stupid smirk fades, arises my grin,
before saying my goodbyes and pushing you off the roof,
i realized, you must at least know the truth,
you hurt me my friend, you really did,
that's why of you i must get rid,
my humiliation was a game that you used to play,
i guess i'm finished now, you have anything to say??
as i watched you shed your tears and quiver, again i felt it, that delight, that shiver,
alas my friend, i'll have to let go,
have fun, be calm and enjoy the show,
alas our relation has to end,
alas i'll miss you my long lost friend...

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