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Alone, no one cares
Hungry! Need a place to sleep?
Here, take my hand friend
We all can be up one day
Next thing we know we're down

"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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The following comments are for "Never Judge A Book by It's Cover / Tanka"

youre such a treat, and a wonderful writer
as well as person......
you always make my heart sing..thanks
dear friend

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

Thanks for your warm and kind words....You know CoCo, I meet a lot of Homeless people, and it gives me the opportunity to talk to them about God, and they tell me how they got that way.

Sometimes we surprise ourselves, a business man/woman, a school teacher, a lawyer, doctor, etc. You will be amazed how some become homeless...

I get a better insight from that person's mouth, or someone who has never experienced being homeless. but the actual person who is homeless..


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 15, 2004 )

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