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A DILEMMA


YOU ARE LIKE A MYSTRY TO ME
THE MORE I WANT TO FIND U OUT,
THE MORE I GO DEEP INSIDE.
EVERY GLANCE TELLS A DIFFERENT STORY
EVERY SMILE IS ALMOST GLORY

THE TENDERNESS OF U'R EYES,
Leaves me in tatters
I'M JUST HERE WITH U
IS ALL THE THING THAT MATTERS.
EYES SAY SO MUCH
IS THERE SOMETHIN ELSE TO SAY
DON'T LET THE HEART TAKEOVER
FADE THE FEELINGS IN THY HEAD

IN A DILEMMA
AS WHICH WAY TO GO
CASTING MY OWN FEARS
AND U'R ALSO
THE MYSTRY WON'T BE SOLVED
WOULD CONTINUE TO ENCHANT
FOREVER IT WILL STAY
THE SWEET MYSTERIOUS GLANCE




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The following comments are for "A Dillema"
by bhaskar

CAPITALS?
The capitals annoyed me and so did the spelling: since when did "your" become "u'r"? If you want to write learn to write.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: June 7, 2004 )

Dilemma?
This truly is a Dilemma...
By the Way... do you do Chat rooms?
Better yet... invest in a dictionary (and use it).

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 7, 2004 )





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