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Moving from radiance into the darkness again.
She sheds the skin of love layer by
Wonder if love is just a question of "when".
When will it end and when will it die.
Constantly finding the only question - never thought to utter - "why"?
Living so long a glorious life of love beyond belief and now, the fall back to earth and what is ordinary and brings not relief.
once more through the snow white clouds, bringing warmth and light.
She reflects on the 1000+ days with him and wishes he just might...

-- Stacey

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