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A Little Lonely Sometimes

they’re fighting downstairs
She’s hiding out
hoping one of them will give up soon
she wishes she could leave without
depending on them
but she can’t
she’s too young
so she sits
and listens to appropriate music
and tries to block out the crying
the fists on the table
the stomping
the shouting
the fighting
and hopes for sleep quick tonight

Heaven doesn't want me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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The following comments are for "A Little Lonely Sometimes"
by SWHCgirl

Thank you
Oh, my God. I really hope you post some more work soon. You may be my new favourite writer on here. You are writing in poetry what i have been writing in song for the past 5 years. I would really appreciate if you would take a look at some of my works and comment or e-mail me soon.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: March 2, 2002 )

Kewl Poem
That was an awesome poem! It's kind of what my next stories on though it takes me a long time to write. I can't do poetry but yours is really good!

( Posted by: brightdark1 [Member] On: March 2, 2002 )

it's very nice !
It's a well composed poem and so much is said in so little. Really great work!

( Posted by: g.s.vasukumar [Member] On: March 5, 2002 )

I was almost brought to tears by this poem. It is so simple, yet so incredibly moving.
Score 9/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 6, 2003 )

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