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I saw her every day,
now I see her ones a month.
Every night I close my eyes and pray that she's okay.
I miss her a lot,
when we meet it's like we'd never been apart.
but than we say goodbye that's the end that makes me cry.
She's my best friend,
Well i think so, or is it the end? ...

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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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