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the error lies in man beleiving he has something that needs to be said, when in truth, it's merely something that needs to be heard. Where people shut thier ears to noise, they'll awaken to a constant driving murmur. So don't yell, don't rebel, slip inside like a spy on a mission, the only consequence is extradition, if you win, you could be the one, to make a difference.

Idle minds cant help but focus on the bigger picture. So we occupy ourselves with petty controversy, to ignore the fact we don't have the answers, and we'll be dust in thirty years max.

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