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Calm waters lapping
carelessly out to sea
making me wonder
if that way, I could ever be

Smooth sailing free
winds upon the sails
letting me know
in my life, I shall not fail.

Ccool river flowing
gently down stream
giving me the strength
to find the inner key.

AR March 16, 1997

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The following comments are for "Waters"
by SinamonAngel

Smooth Sailing
This is lovely. I enjoyed the read. Third stanza, . Great work as always



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 10, 2004 )

reminds of days spent by the lake superior U/L

( Posted by: crowhaven [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )

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