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Parts Of A Tree
May 30th, 2004

If i were the branches
i would lower them to you as bait
and trick you into eating the apple

If i was like the bark
i could finally resist you
and you wouldn't be able to hurt me

If i was a flower
i could lure you over to me
and spray my poison into your breath

If i were the roots
i would trip you as you walked
and i'd make you fall for me

If i were rings in the wood
i could watch myself get older
and see how i expand

if i was a seed
i could follow the wind far away
and finally start a new life

But i am just a leaf
i eventually turn myself over
and you pick me up once again

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by eyescovered

Parts of a tree
I loved you vivid descriptions. Nice read.

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 3, 2004 )





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