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Ready To Explode
May 30th, 2004

There's something inside of me
that sadly, i am unable to sedate
It makes me boil to a high degree
and burn at an alarming rate

Inner rage is not something seen
but heard when it has created
a storm that will not agree
that has become a common trait

If my thoughts can never flee
then i will accept it as my fate
So if my dreams are never free
i'll wake up in a new mental state

I relax while i wait, so patiently
for the bomb inside to detonate
Making my mind turn into debris
So i can no longer think straight

...i close my eyes in order to see...

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by eyescovered

Welcome back
I hadn't seen anything new from you lately, nice to see your back. Enjoy your work. Very interesting.

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 1, 2004 )

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