On The Day
by Enforced Bliss (Member) - published: May 31, 2004
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Category - Flash Fiction
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On the day that the last believer in the old gods died Hades stood next to Sisyphus' shade and said, "You are free. You and your stone may rest."

Sisyphus paused, wiped his brow and resumed his labours.

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But would I be a good Messiah with my low self-esteem? / If I don't believe in myself would that be blasphemy? - The Bloodhound Gang Hell Yeah

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The following comments are for "On The Day"
by Enforced Bliss

subtle
Bliss,
This one was very subtle and to the point. I like seeing so much powerful meaning coming from so few words. Good job.

( Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: May 31, 2004 )

flash
Great mini-fable. Definitely flash and brilliant (as usual).

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: June 1, 2004 )

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