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Unbalanced

Festering Cracks in My minds eye, eroding away at beliefs and traditions. A wad of crumpled rubble, scattered carelessly in My quests' wake.

A lifetime of systmes, of checks and balances now suspect. What was once taken for granted, now lay at My feet, disheveled and all but abandoned. Clawed through, kicked at, studied through a magnifying glass. Melting from the glare of the heat of passionate yearning.

The scourge of information lay still now. Dust settling down upon it. Soon once again, to be sifted, and sorted, removed and discarded into their rightful place among importance. Surrendering what was, to what is, and what will be.

All the wonders I thought I knew so well, now a fallen rustle of past inquiry. A bargan bin of useless knowledge and priveliged gossip. The balance tipped heavily. Laden. Wisdom wanton and untethered.

Sifting Sifting - reclaiming My right to choose to believe what I dare to, what I instinctively know as truth. All the while perched atop My rubble. I smile, fresh from debris within. A new slate. A new beginning. Purged of the steel bars of societal restraint. Nothing cementing My thoughts. Not one thing is concrete, and all is free to be explored, discovered and rediscovered. Dancing and singing with joy upon My God given right to be Me.

AR April 9, 2002




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The following comments are for "Unbalanced"
by SinamonAngel

"Unbalanced"
Wow what a great read this was... I appreciate your insites.

( Posted by: BevRaffaele [Member] On: June 30, 2004 )

Curious...
Am I, was this written after the ending of a relationship?

It sounds as if you are re-evaluating those things in your life that may no longer have significance... And re-establishing priorities since all that is important has now changed...

And I don't believe this is unbalanced (unless you are refering to the situation on a temporary basis)...

Very revealing of you, your mind and the ability to adapt and regain control and direction in your life...

Very Good write...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 30, 2004 )

truth
I felt this coming from the depths of your heart
very nicely said..U/L

( Posted by: crowhaven [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )





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