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Tangle forests of thoughts
all weaving into each other
criss crossing over, under
around and through the
blue coloured memories
and dreams of decades past.

New budding leaves of creativity
openning, awakening upon the
brances of fertile imagination.
Blossoming into a full grown
creation. A gem among the seeds.
A new life bursting with spring.

Rushing river of emotion fueling the
energy behind a million thoughts.
Bubbling, Trickling, Cascading.
Quenching the thirst for more;
for the unknown; for the possibilities,
not yet possible.

04/09/02 AR

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The following comments are for "Spring"
by SinamonAngel

I enjoyed reading your poem about spring, that is one of my favorite season.... I can smell the atmosphere as the flowers and leaves come to an full blossom...God's wonderful work at hand!

Thanks for a great read...


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 28, 2004 )

A gem among the seeds.
Are you a gardener? ;) The "criss crossing over, under/around and through" of emotion and gardening/seed/plant images you've done in this and the last poem of yours I read - so you're not quite sure where one lets off and the other begins - is wonderful. They are so full you have to reread them to make sure you've gotten it all... and I'm still not sure I've gotten everything you intended from this poem... beautiful language. It's up to you if you want to clarify your message with a couple more blossoms revealing themselves near the end or weather you'd rather your reader hunt for thier orchid... ;)

( Posted by: SkyTigress [Member] On: June 28, 2004 )

That's what I like about nature...

It seeds ones thoughts and brings out the best...

This was very soothing...

I liked the picture of the river you refered to...

Very good write...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: June 29, 2004 )

It is nice to read a different twist on a subject where volumes have been written... This is a very nice piece. Check your spelling. Sincerely, Bev

( Posted by: BevRaffaele [Member] On: June 30, 2004 )

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