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The following comments are for "There Was Once a Man That So Loved His Wife"
by TommyGoround

I thought this was well written and well organized. It was shocking, of course, with the mundane for a backdrop. What a great formula for a macabre story. The humor at the end was good too.

( Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: May 29, 2004 )

I love this. How you ever came up with the idea and then decided it would be even better written like a fairy tale, I'll never know, but it was good. You wrote it well, you held your voice, and you even drove home a twisted sort of moral at the end. Well done.

( Posted by: amie [Member] On: May 29, 2004 )

Very Warped
Very cool!

While I admit that it never occured to me that the Man may still be enjoying the conjugal side of marriage I didn't find the idea revolting in this context.

I think it is a beautiful story of love caught by the temporal.

The kids reactions were beyond priceless.

Thank you for this.

May you never thirst


( Posted by: Enforced Bliss [Member] On: May 30, 2004 )

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