The following comments are for "There Was Once a Man That So Loved His Wife" by TommyGoround
I thought this was well written and well organized. It was shocking, of course, with the mundane for a backdrop. What a great formula for a macabre story. The humor at the end was good too.
Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: May 29, 2004
I love this. How you ever came up with the idea and then decided it would be even better written like a fairy tale, I'll never know, but it was good. You wrote it well, you held your voice, and you even drove home a twisted sort of moral at the end. Well done.