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Three hearts beat as one?
Not without palpitation.
Can one have love for two?
Not without complication.
So what could be the cure
for such a dire situation?
A healthy diet?
Proper relaxation?
Can anyone perscribe
the proper medication?
I'm afarid to look
in the back of the book.
But I do beleive lonliness
is the answer
to this equation.

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