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Just blow out my candlelight,
Then Iíll finally be alright,
Away from all the fights,
No more tears at night,
Itís never gonna be okay,
Just let me end it todayÖ

Please just let me,
End my misery,
Just let me go,
Donít you know,
My life is endless pain,
Itís just like acid rain..

Canít you please just kill me,
Put me out of my misery,
Please make me history,
Canít you at all see,
I donít wanna be here,
I want so much to disappearÖ


I want to die,
Ainít no lie,
My life is like acid rain,
All destroyed with stains,
Full of painÖjust let me end it

Let me end it,
Let me end it,


Everyone is a good writer! :)

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The following comments are for "Acid Rain"
by Avrilfan

this could be good
i agree with the comment above. i like the lyrics. i invision thembeing sung by evanescence. this could be real good if it had the right music and stuff. keep going with this. great job.

( Posted by: k8ebug [Member] On: July 11, 2004 )

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