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My life has never been perfect
I never thought that you helped that much.
I never understood what you meant to me
Now that you were torn from my life
I have begun to understand
Your gracias presence kept me laughing
Your silly jokes drove away my meaningless pain
Now that you’re gone the pain is obvious
No one makes me laugh the way you do
I miss you and wish you could see us now
We’re graduating and the void is apparent
Guide us Melody Through our lives
And watch us grow


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Deja

dejalovesyou@yahoo.com


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The following comments are for "Guide Us"
by Wanabe

I never thought that you helped that much.
>>I miss you and wish you could see us now
We’re graduating and the void is apparent
Guide us Melody Through our lives
And watch us grow

( Posted by: SkyTigress [Member] On: June 24, 2004 )

Shoot
I wrote a huge long part after that!

I wanted to say thank you for sharing this with us. The portion of the poem that I quoted, I had suggested you expand, which I saw you did in one of your other poems, and it was wonderful.

( Posted by: SkyTigress [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )





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