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I wasn't sure at all
What they were thinking
As I hobbled down the street
With my one shoe.

But ask me they did,
One after the other.
"Have you lost a shoe?
Poor love"

They needed to know
I had actually just found
the shoe.

If only I could tell them.
If only I could speak.
If only.



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The following comments are for "One giant step"
by Uzzy

down and out
I like this poem a lot. Good work.

( Posted by: John Shade [Member] On: May 28, 2004 )





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