Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
10Unknown

You must login to vote

I love how ya clean them dishes
or burn the trash way out back.

When you put the blue stuff in the toilet
or them magazines in a stack.

You tie up all of the newspapers
that was lyin' on the floor.

Then ya look at me kinda sexy
when ya finish all yer chores.

I was fixin' to tell you I loved you
When you belched the words "Bull Crap!"

I meant to show some eeefection
but it...came out like a nap.

I seen you in the doorway
fetchin a booger the way you do.

I think you caught my fancy
when you rubbed it on your shoe.

As my Daddy said, you love a woman...
by the deeds she does.

I imagine that makes you a fine a woman
as their ever was.

An' I knew you had stolen my heart
and I'd never let you go

When I saw you in the garden
just a workin that ole' hoe.

But I never knew you loved me back
til I found you with wet hair.

Just a scrubbin' and a scrubbin'
the stains outa my dirty underwear.





------
It wasn't my fault...I fell asleep and missed my stop.


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Love and dirty underwear"
by Jeff

Blatent and blunt!
I love it!!!

Such a simple truth - ie who the hell else would do that, if not for love....

Such an apt way to put it too - you can't fail but see the moral, and enjoy the ride along the way!

Ju =*_*= *bouncing*

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: February 28, 2002 )

very effective
This is a great poem. It's so simple, but it's absolutely on the mark. Great stuff.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: December 14, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: