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Upon the moistened lips they lie;
unspoken words anxious to fly.
Stretching forth across the page;
engaging breath,take center stage.

Vintage words flow from the mind;
taking flight,give way to rhyme.
Cling to life,to be transposed;
into a poem,or loving prose.

Perhaps they'll brighten someones day.
Revive a memory along the way.
Golden words, they play their role;
when placed together become the soul.

written by Lorraine,May 24th,2004

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Lorraine


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The following comments are for "Only Words"
by Lorraine

Great !!!
Such a nice poem about words Lorraine.

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

well put
Excellent. You said it perfectly with a smooth and fluent rhyme.

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

Only Words
Yes Lorraine, they are simply words, until someone can weave them into the enlightening prose as you have done here. I enjoy this poem.

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

only words
Lorraine, this is great...I really enjoyed this piece...especially the last 2 lines :)
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

Only Words
I'd like to thank all of you for your wonderful comments.Some poems come easy, some not so easy. This one just kind of fell out of my head.Yes, I agree ,Dareva, They are only words until someone puts them together.There are so many talented poets here.Your kind words are enough to keep me writing. Thank you once again.My Best..Lorraine

( Posted by: Lorraine [Member] On: May 27, 2004 )





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