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this may "offend" people. so i'm sorry. it's not meant to. i don't see how it could offend people, but just in case, i apologize now. has a little bit of language i like riddles. this is just a short rant. just read. if you don't understand what it's about, ask and i will tell you what it's about. read and review. thank you :o)

veruca *:o)honk honk(o:*


you will go inside and tear me apart... kill me with a tiny cut. who knew someone like me could be such a burden to bear. or maybe i'm a something. you don't think i'm human. you don't think i have feelings. you don't think i feel. i'm not like you? you don't know me. you haven't seen my face, but somehow deep inside you hate me anyway. you don't care. i will "hold you back" from who you are and what you want to do. you think that justifies what you're doing to me? fuck you for thinking that's right. you'll never understand anyway.

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The following comments are for "Since When Did It Become Okay?"
by Veruca Salt

Rants are good, so are Chi-jua-jua's
It intrigues me. I liked the emotion. I'm guessing it's either about guilt or possibly about the feeling you get after listening to Britney Spears, of course, upon further thought, those two things may be the same thing???

It's also worth mentioning that I yelled almost those exact words to my Chi-jua-jua last Saturday after he pissed in my kitchen...strange, No?

( Posted by: Jeff [Member] On: February 27, 2002 )

lol. after reading it again, the britney spears relation actually fits very well. it's was supposed to be a piece on abortion from a baby's point on view. lol. who knew...thanks for reviewing! :o) lol.

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: February 28, 2002 )

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