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I am the dead
awakened by your call
why did you break
into the secrets of mine
within my tomb
even in my death

I hear your calls
even within this
dark wooden box
which I lay in
You cried
"Come back! Come back to me!"

Will you not let me rest,
rest in peace
with the angels,
the fallen angels
just like I have been
let me return
to the darkness
that empowered me
to the sorrows
that grew with me
to the pain
that was created
for me.

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The following comments are for "For Me. Only."
by ^white

You really know how to express pain clearly. Thank you for that. I haven't been able to write for a while, and your poetry helps explain how I feel.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: July 4, 2004 )

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