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If tomorrow never comes
At least I can feel...
My life was full,
Very rich and real.

I will recall
From the realms of dawn
That this life was lived
Long... before it was gone.


------
Maxii


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The following comments are for "If Tomorrow Never Comes"
by MaxiiJ

Nice Maxii
Beautifully put.

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

I'll Say
Maxii;
A very nice read here. Short and right to the point...

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: May 26, 2004 )

oh maxi
I admire you as a write,and adore your gracious
spirit....you are an inspiration of kindness which has shaken ever so softly the leaves of my own world......

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

CoCo, Thanks
I will always cherish your comment! Now, THAT, makes my day.

Marilyn

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: June 12, 2004 )

If Tomorrow Never Comes
Madam, I love this poem. It's worth revisiting your site. I love this more than Ronan Keating's song 'If Tomorrow Never Comes'.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Maxii
Maxii,

Beautiful, meaningful, everybody as already said it. To have lived a full life and have the wisdom to know it....

Thank you for sharing,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Thank you all for gracious words
What an uplift you all have given my spirit as I reopen this site a week after knee surgery! Better than any "get well" card could be, are the kindly words of kindred souls! Thank you.
Marilyn

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

Get Well Madam
Madam, I hope that you'll get well soon. I missed your writings and it was like a treat seeing them all again, especially this one, which is the nicest. Honestly, it's also because I like Keating's song, but like I said your words are better!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )





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