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This haiku's about a person that has
just brought a cooker and is
cooking chicken breasts on his new BBQ.
He's admiring his BBQ and how
beautiful it is. Then it's time to
turn the chicken...


Fascinated by,
your overwhelming beauty
may I touch your breasts

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The following comments are for "NO!!!"
by Raejon

now i'm hungry!!!!!!!!!

( Posted by: Majnuna [Member] On: May 19, 2004 )

Only Raejon...
Mouse you are way too funny! It's a good thing you explained it before we read it!!!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 21, 2004 )

Thanks Pen, Majnuna, and Nae..
Yip, I'll have to agree that it's
a pretty sick haiku.

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: May 23, 2004 )

I like this one Mouse. I hope you did not explain what it is and let everybody give their reactions first. I like haikus, you know. And this one is so unique and is worth to be memorized, I believe that is what haikus are for, and the reason why they are so short.


( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: May 24, 2004 )

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