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Standing here
My drink pressed
To my chest

Donít know anyone
Keep smiling
Heís popular
Sheís popular
Canít keep at the host
He has to mix

Go to the loo for something to do




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The following comments are for "Danny at the party"
by Uzzy

It's my party and...
Lots of picture in a few lines. Oh, yeah! Been there and done THAT, sure 'nuff! Even the popular folks have to hit the facilities. Enjoyed this effort a lot, thanks!

( Posted by: SamPark [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )

Amusing as Hell
Oh, I really liked this little entry. Funny and apt and probably far more true than most of us would like to admit.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )

"We read to learn we are not alone"
The little line, above, from the movie SHADOWLANDS is epitomized by this quirky, insightful poem of yours! Sure reminds me of some days gone by... Thank God (they're gone!)

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )





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