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There you go again
Getting you're own back
With childish revenge

Using your tongue
As a flame
In the forest

The way I see it
Mummy just wanted
To know
How you removed
That annoying noise
From the back of the car

And as you would
You told her straight
It was achieved
By making her sit
In the front

But it was
Funny



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The following comments are for "There you go again"
by Uzzy

that really was funny
hehehe...the annoying noise in the backseat...just make her sit in the front...I love it

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )

lol
Nice funny, full of chukles (spell check)

( Posted by: Anowara [Member] On: November 9, 2005 )





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